Bowspirit's Aim

Fourth Target - Chained

Monday July 18, 2011 - Present

Karralyn Greensleeves and Sevvie Reves team up for their inaugural mission, given to them by their new boss, Li Antha Bloodraven. The two must learn to work together to recover a magical artifact of great power before it falls into the wrong hands, which are already reaching menacingly towards it.

Content Warnings

This chapter contains minor nuditySevvie sleeps naked; at the beginning of the chapter her silhouette and back can be seen. Shortly after and later in the chapter, she walks around in a bra, and there is a brief panty shot., swearing,Sevvie's got a mouth on her, but for now, nothing more spicy than "damn" or "shit." heights,Both Sevvie and Karra slide down cliffs or into holes at various points. There is also a giant bottomless chasm that they have difficulty crossing. blood and injury,Karralyn is injured several times, and various other characters also sustain injuries. Sevvie continues to be a vampire. non-human fluids,A monster explodes into monster goo. violence,A monster attacks and the characters defend themselves; a large fight between two factions takes place. tooth loss,A monster gets hit in the head and loses a canine tooth. burning buildings,A large building is deliberately set on fire with both illusion magic and then real actual fire. and xenophobia.Kanos explicitly mentions the Hellfyre stance that humans are superior to the other sentient races. Or will, when I finally get there lol Hover over each for spoilers and more detail, if desired.

Fourth Target: Chained
Sunrise The Morning Routine
Waking Up on the Wrong Side of the Sunlight I Remember Now
Hauling Ass Addicted to Air
Exposition Timed Quest
Where Were You Hiding That Map, Li Antha? Tortoise and Hare
Third Time Watch Your Step
A Pit of Her Own Digging Invisible Threads
Heave! The Gaping Chasm
At an Impasse Bad Cliffside Poetry
Rise Up
Ker-THUND!
Blundering to Victory Leap of Logic
Leap of Terror Miles Down
Rest Break Once More, With Trepidation
Puzzle Pieces The Plan
One Way Street Almost There
Onward Suspiciously Convenient
Maybe You Should Marry It Fifty/Fifty
One to Each Side Just About Lunchtime
Sack Lunch Bravado
Concessions Confessions
Say Wha...? Sentence of Angels
Knight in Rusted Armor
Bertoh, Son of Boris Skin to Scabbard
Consequences Loud Noises
Out Cold To the Looter Go the Spoils
Do Not Dry Clean Woozy
Sleeping Beauty Like a Cat
A Walk Will Do You Good Curse of the Purse
Vile Relief Some 'Splainin To Do
Irrelevant Blood in the Gutter
Tiger in the Teahouse Transferrence
Voices Carry Ugh, Trees
Approach Slowly Bad Peoples
Called It Repeating, Of Course
Struggle Found Something
Thwack!
Splorch Yuck
Reactions ANo Sudden Movements
Dowsing Burble
Follow Your Ears She'll Be All Right
She Rises You Lied to Me!
Planning Close to Midnight
Process of Elimination Rushing Over
On The Nose Empty Pockets
Flame Talker
From The Smoke
Trespassing Barking Orders
Tactical Retreat Head Who?
Through the Woods

Random Xella Babble: Fourth Target

Tuesday February 13, 2024

Fourth Target is the longest chapter of BA by far, both by page count and time taken to complete. As of the start of 2024, the chapter has been in progress for thirteen years and 94 pages, and looks to require at least another 10-20 pages to complete, which will hopefully not take another thirteen years, heh.

Obviously the art in this chapter varies pretty wildly, given the long span of time it's taken place. I think it does its best in the 2016-ish era, just after Bertoh the Brave. I mean, I'm a huge fan of Bertoh too, but those couple pages right after make me very happy, artistically. There are a couple things I would do differently past that point if I was going back and doing it again, but I've told myself time and time again that going back to re-do existing pages when there are non-existing pages to do is a fool's errand, and anyway fixing old art is an infinite loop that leads into madness. Still, maybe some day.

That said, I am going back and making some minor changes; the last panel of the Bertoh sequence originally led into the next scene in a way I didn't like after the five year gap, and likewise with the first page in the woods after leaving the lodge. There were also two places with double-page spreads where my page counts didn't work out quite right, so a little extra padding and/or trimming was required. Also, Kanos' face in that spread was so off-model for his first legitimate appearance that it was just too much for me, heh.